tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post3800111613485524513..comments2023-07-07T02:39:38.720-05:00Comments on Mrs. Humphreys' 4th Grade Class: Writing Workshop 10.1.10Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-46336209028427717502010-10-04T12:58:40.974-05:002010-10-04T12:58:40.974-05:00Our class had a great time when we where in Writei...Our class had a great time when we where in Writeing Workshope! We put our writing on Edmodo for everyone<br />to see. But before we stared we played a game and it was called Where am I, so it will help us with it. It was really fun! I want to do a Whiteing Workshop!Griffnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-37185575633915204352010-10-04T12:58:12.808-05:002010-10-04T12:58:12.808-05:00We had a lot of fun doing that! I love doing that ...We had a lot of fun doing that! I love doing that because it helps me with my writing. When we did 'Where am I' that acutly blew my brain, but I worked with my team and we did good.Mattnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-28887594691657970872010-10-04T12:58:12.582-05:002010-10-04T12:58:12.582-05:00We had a lot of fun doing that! I love doing that ...We had a lot of fun doing that! I love doing that because it helps me with my writing. When we did 'Where am I' that acutly blew my brain, but I worked with my team and we did good.Mattnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-12425820691008790792010-10-04T12:58:03.885-05:002010-10-04T12:58:03.885-05:00I really like how 4D discribed the football game. ...I really like how 4D discribed the football game. It had great strong discrption like whe they said the gum under the chairs. also when they scented caromel crackerack. The beads of sweat help me understand how hard he must be playing. One of the best parts are the buttery popcorn taste. That is a amazing way to write a discriptionLeenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-5806523625725164792010-10-04T12:51:52.569-05:002010-10-04T12:51:52.569-05:00I liked the 4c football game alot it mad me seem l...I liked the 4c football game alot it mad me seem like I was actually at a Titans game (my favorite team). My favorite part of it was the cotton candy I love cotton candy at the footbal games.JoJonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-5467643538965560212010-10-04T12:51:22.851-05:002010-10-04T12:51:22.851-05:00I learned how to use words without just saying the...I learned how to use words without just saying the real word. I will use this for when I get older and right now. I love it!Philipnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-34901784081352374962010-10-04T12:46:12.258-05:002010-10-04T12:46:12.258-05:00I like 4C and 4D's football game because It ma...I like 4C and 4D's football game because It makes me feel like I'm really there. I learned that when you write stories you never have to use the main idea.Ryanhttp://Ryannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-22776400478610504202010-10-04T09:01:17.191-05:002010-10-04T09:01:17.191-05:00I learned how to make a visual paragraph. It was f...I learned how to make a visual paragraph. It was fun!Jimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-67714537371420291582010-10-04T09:01:12.122-05:002010-10-04T09:01:12.122-05:00I learned how to make a visual paragraph. It was f...I learned how to make a visual paragraph. It was fun!Jimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-9637190895922689512010-10-04T08:59:05.173-05:002010-10-04T08:59:05.173-05:00I learned that I could describe places and things ...I learned that I could describe places and things by using your scenes,and I liked the grocery store group in 4D because they used ada moda peay.Evnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-22501113824199755692010-10-04T08:58:57.823-05:002010-10-04T08:58:57.823-05:00I like how 4C describes the football stadium when ...I like how 4C describes the football stadium when you mentioned the "colition of helmets" and the "cold metal seats". I think you have great vocabulary in writing your paragraph!Houstonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-56508629769528962742010-10-04T08:58:47.195-05:002010-10-04T08:58:47.195-05:00I learned that describing helps a lot especalily w...I learned that describing helps a lot especalily when your writing a story, and I especily like 4D's circus it had a lot of decsription and detail. l also liked everyones too.Jacknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-21052737172398047782010-10-04T08:58:45.719-05:002010-10-04T08:58:45.719-05:00I liked 4-c's mall paragrph. I liked it becaus...I liked 4-c's mall paragrph. I liked it because in the paragraph it said how the cash registers opend by saying cha-ching. I also liked 4-D's grocery store paragraph; I liked how they described the sliding doors,the beeps of the price scanner, and and the sense of begging children.Liamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-83666985658722795972010-10-04T08:58:15.810-05:002010-10-04T08:58:15.810-05:00I love 4C's football game because they don'...I love 4C's football game because they don't tell you what kind of game but they give you a good hint. I really like 4D's birthday party because if they didn't give any of those excellent context clues then you would probably think it is something else. I like 4Cs and 4Ds circus's because it makes me want to eat that salty popcorn and the sweet flavor of cotton candy.Thomasnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-52537213242076229242010-10-04T08:57:33.724-05:002010-10-04T08:57:33.724-05:00I learned how to identify by listining then imagin...I learned how to identify by listining then imagining what he said and tell what it looked like to me.Michaelnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-2233496620425923812010-10-04T08:56:12.598-05:002010-10-04T08:56:12.598-05:00I like the detail of 4D's football game becaus...I like the detail of 4D's football game because they said," I can see the beads of sweat falling off the man's face".Willnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-32395640862859479022010-10-04T08:55:43.933-05:002010-10-04T08:55:43.933-05:00I like the detail of 4D's football game becaus...I like the detail of 4D's football game because they said," I can see the beads of sweat falling off the man's face".Willnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-59647989707313609222010-10-04T08:54:54.696-05:002010-10-04T08:54:54.696-05:00I like 4D circus because it was so wackey. The dis...I like 4D circus because it was so wackey. The discription had lots of details. I like it when it tells you about the clowns, and when it tells you people smashing pies n peoples faces.Buzznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-39897244313540426542010-10-04T08:54:42.848-05:002010-10-04T08:54:42.848-05:00I learned how to identify by listining then imagin...I learned how to identify by listining then imagining what he said and tell what it looked like to me.Michaelnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-3265504193234714442010-10-04T08:54:23.693-05:002010-10-04T08:54:23.693-05:00I really liked 4C description of the football game...I really liked 4C description of the football game because they made it clear that it was a football game.Walkernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-10656296243705181562010-10-04T08:54:10.362-05:002010-10-04T08:54:10.362-05:00I like the onamodapia on the Birthday Party from 4...I like the onamodapia on the Birthday Party from 4D ,and it was the cha ching sound of the cash register.Ethannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-62923734302960200532010-10-04T08:52:22.360-05:002010-10-04T08:52:22.360-05:00I learned how to identify things by listening, sme...I learned how to identify things by listening, smelling, feeling, tasting, and seeing.Davidnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3523782589952308445.post-65402640004812082382010-10-04T08:46:56.170-05:002010-10-04T08:46:56.170-05:00I learned how to identify by hearing then imaginin...I learned how to identify by hearing then imagining the things he said and say what it looks like to me.Michaelnoreply@blogger.com